Mother horse

We are learning to write a narrative writing using adjective.

I found it easy to think what i was going to write about and who were going to be the characters.

I found it hard to to find all of my intelligent adjective amd adverds.

I really enjoyed writing it and getting to think about some juicy word and all of that .

Next time I just need to think more about making it make sense.

WALT: write a narrative using adjectives.

The Characters: Mother horse,The ponies and the big tiger.

One nice perfect day, Beautiful mother horse took her wonderful ponies to the deep dark forest to look for juicy delicious berries.

Mother horse saw a big furious tiger and she ran quickly away from her ponies.

Mother horse started limping badly, her leg looked very sore.

The vicious tiger saw the horse but did not see the ponies.

The tiger ran after the fantastic mother horse.

Mother horse´s pretty leg was not sore so she aggressively kicked the tiger and galloped quickly away.