Persuasive Writing-Healthy Eating.

WALT write our opinion and our reasons.

30.03.17

Healthy eating

I think should eat healthy food.

Firstly I think we should eat healthy food

because we will have healthy eyes.

Secondly I think we should eat healthy food because we will have healthy skin.

Another reason I think we should eat healthy food is

because we will have heaps of energy.

Lastly I think we should eat healthy food because our body will be healthy.  

So I think we should eat healthy food.  

Recount Writing - At Kapa Haka.

I am learning to add my thoughts and feelings in my writing.

20.03.17

        At kapa haka

On Sunday afternoon I went with my Mum to watch the

haka and the kaea was Mahanga.

First me and Andy played in the sandpit while they were practising.

Then me and Andy went to watch the haka and they were so hearty. I felt amazed because they were so awesome.

Persuasive Writing - Rules at School.

I am learning to write my opinion with reasons.

14.03.17

Rules at school.

I think we should have rules at school.

Firstly I think we should have rules at school because

then we will be a safe school.

Secondly I think we should have rules at school because then we will be a happy and a safe school.

Another reason I think we should have rules at school is because then we will be play with each other nicely.

Lastly I think we should have rules at school

because then the children at our school will be nice to each other.

So I think we should have rules at school.

Recount Writing

I am learning to add my feelings in my writing.

13.03.17

In the weekend.

In the weekend me and my god dad and my two god brothers Andy and VJ went to Trampoline World to bounce on the giant trampoline. It was fun playing tag with the ball. I liked bouncing and playing flips on the tramps.

Here are my learning goals for Term 1 2017.

Persuasive Writing

I am learning to write my opinion and add reasons.

03\03\17

It is wrong to fight.

I think it is wrong to fight.

Firstly I think it is wrong to fight because people will get

hurt.

Secondly I think it is wrong to fight because people might

break the equipment.

Another reason is I think it is wrong to fight because

somebody will get scared.

Lastly I think it is wrong to fight because somebody will cry.

So I think it is wrong to fight.

Persuasive Writing.

I am learning to write my opinion and add reasons.

08.03.17

Being a bucket filling school.

I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school.

Firstly I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school because people will be happy.

Secondly I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school because people will make some friends.

Another reason is because everyone will be nice.

Lastly I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school so everyone can look after each other.

So I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school.

This is my first blog post.

I am learning to write my opinion and add reasons.

10.03.17

Brush your teeth

I think we should brush our teeth every day.

Firstly I think we should brush our teeth every day because then we will not get holes in your teeth.

Secondly I think we should brush our teeth every day

because then we will not get yellow teeth.

Another reason  I think we should brush our teeth every day because then we will have healthy teeth.

Lastly I think we should brush our teeth every day because then our teeth will be clean teeth.