I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.
17/08/17
Cross Country.
“Ready set go,” shouted Whaea Rosina.
I took off like a race car. My heart was pumping super fast like it never pumped before. It was Wednesday morning and I was racing with the 5 and 6 year old’s.
We ran around the tree and up the hill. The hardest thing was going up the hill 1 time on Mrs Paraha’s farm.
I was so tired when I was running up the hill 1 time.
It was so hot when I was running. I felt like I was going to explode while I was running. My side felt like I got stabbed with a knife. It was very painful. I was told that it is called a stitch from running super fast. In the race I came first. My mum and my dad were really surprised and really happy. I was excited because I knew I was going to have Mcdonald's for my dinner because I came first in cross country. I can’t wait to race in Ohaeawai. I wonder if I could come first there too?
