E-asttle writing test result.

Here is my Term 4 writing test result.

I am working at Level 1a. That means I am working at my expected National Standard level in Writing.

I am doing well at using good ideas, using the correct structure and language and organising my ideas in the correct order.

Learning at Tautoro School

Toku Pepeha

Te Reo maori and singing

AT Tautoro School.

AT Tautoro School.

I love learning at Tautoro School because we can go to practise sports with Matua Matt so we can play sports properly. It’s cool that we can go to learn dance with Whaea Dorothy. We have two awesome helpers for our reading. We read with Mrs Graham and Whaea Hilary.

Te Reo Maori: Kei te haere ... ki hea?

Recount Writing. At the beach.

I am learning to use the correct structure for recount writing.                                                

4.12.2017

                               At the beach

On a lovely Sunday morning my family and I went to the beach in Opo. First my Uncle Rewe ran into the water. When he ran in he did a dive. Next Uncle Mano and my Dad ran into the water.  My Dad said, “It’s freezing.” Then Uncle Mano ran in the water. It was warm he said.  

Later on Bracken and I ran down to the sand to play with Jhai, Panapa and Zion. It was fun playing in the sand.

I felt glad, happy and great.

Then Bracken and I had a race back up to the table.

Bracken won and I lost.

After that Uncle Mano and Bracken and I went to the Fish and Chip shop down the road from the beach. Uncle Mano asked if  Bracken and I wanted to go on to the bridge and we did go.

Finally Uncle Mano, my Dad, Bracken and I hopped into the car and we went to the falls on the way back to my house.

seed to feed

basic facts

I am learning to get faster and more accurate with basic facts.

Persuasive Writing-We should play sport every day.

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing

19/10/2017

We should play sport every day.

I think we should play Sport every day.

Firstly I think we should play Sport every day because when we are running we are getting fit.

Secondly I think we should play Sport every day because you can learn heaps of tricks like passing the ball to your teammate.

Another reason why I think we should play Sport every day is because we will work as a team.

Lastly I think we should play Sport every day because we learn to listen to Matua Matt when he is talking.

So that’s why I think we should play Sport every day.

Persuasive Writing -We should do Homework every night.

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.

18/10/2017

We should do homework every night.

I think we should do homework every night.

First I think I should do homework every night because it helps me to learn and achieve my learning goals by practising my learning.

Secondly I think we should do homework every night because it helps us to learn.

Another reason why I think we should do homework every night is because we can spend 1 on 1 time with our nans.

Lastly I think we should do homework every night because when you learn your homework at home you are learning your words off by heart.

So that’s why we should do our homework every night.

Recount Writing-At the tangi.

                                                  24/08/17

                          At the tangi

On Wednesday afternoon my family and I went to Whaea

 Dawnette's tangi. I thought it was so sad.

First my mum went to try to find Nana Ma in the kitchen. Nana Ma was washing the dishes in the kitchen.

Next Naki came out of the marae then Naki asked me if I want to have a race at the back of the marae.
I beat Naki. I felt happy and glad. Then my mum and my Nana went to make the bed for Nana, Naki and I. Then Andy and I went on  his chromebook and watched the dragons 2. The movie made me cry because the movie was so sad. After that Naki, Konrad and I went back into the marae again. Then Konrad had to say his name and Naki and I had to say our name too. I was so shy but Naki was not shy. Then some  manuhiri came to the tangi. The Nanas were crying because my Nana passed away. Finally me and Naki went back into the van for a sleep because we were so getting sleepy.

We should drink water every day.

WALT to use the correct structure for Persuasive Writing.

We should drink water every day

Have you ever been thirsty? I have and the best thing to drink is water and here is why.

Firstly I think we should drink water every day because We won’t get a dry mouth and your body does dry up.

Secondly I think we should drink water every day because so we Keep drying water it is so healthy.

Another reason why I think we should drink water every day is because I found out that water keeps your skin looking healthy, Also did you know that when you don't or stop drinking water you get hydrated.

Lastly I think we should drink water every day because water is very healthy and it makes you grow tall and strong.

So that’s why I think we should drink water.

Persuasive Writing-Kapahaka is important to learn.

WALT use the correct structure for Persuasive Writing.

20/09/17

Kapahaka is important to learn.

I think that kapahaka is important to learn.

Firstly I think kapahaka is important because kapahaka helps us to learn Te Reo Maori  when we sing the words.

Secondly I think kapahaka is important because we learn how to keep in the beat with the actions and takahia.

Another reason why I think kapahaka is important is because we learn to sing in tune.

Lastly I think kapahaka is important because it makes us sing in the right time.

So that’s why I think kapahaka is important.

At kapa haka

WALT  Add  Details so our Readers Will Understand our story I achieved  my Goals.

26/06/17

                                At Kapa haka

On Saturday afternoon my mum, my brother and I went to kapa haka at Okaihau College because my mum helps the Okaihau College kapahaka group.

They really need to practice the haka, the haka powhiri and the poi. I felt happy and excited.

When my family and I got to kapa haka I saw heaps of people. They were playing in the gym. Some were playing handball and some were playing shoots.

First I played with Tyla and Piimiroa. We played shoots. I got Tyla and Piimiroa out heaps of times. I felt great. Next Tyla  Piimiroa and I played handball. It was fun because I was in the kings square heaps of times. I got them out. I felt great and amazing.

After that the kapa haka people had a break.

My multiplication basic facts problem solving.

I am learning to get faster and more accurate with solving grouping problems.
I improved my score by 10 points. I got faster at solving each problem.

Look at the taonga I made for my Dad.

Happy Father's day, Dad.

My Father's Day Poster.

Addition Basic Fact Practice.

I have been 

Practicing my addition basic Facts. I wanted to get faster and more accurate.

when I started this week my top score was  8.   today I scored 45.
Here are my results.

Recount Writting - Cross Country.

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.

17/08/17

                    Cross Country.

“Ready set go,” shouted Whaea Rosina.

I took off like a race car.  My heart was pumping  super fast like it never pumped before. It was Wednesday morning and I was racing with the 5 and 6 year old’s.

We ran around the tree and up the hill. The hardest thing was going up the hill 1 time on Mrs Paraha’s farm.

I was so tired when I was running up the hill 1 time.  

It was so hot when I was running. I felt like I was going to explode while I was running. My side felt like I got stabbed with a knife. It was very painful. I was told that it is called a stitch from running super fast. In the race I came first. My mum and my dad were really surprised and really happy.  I was excited because I knew I was going to have Mcdonald's for my dinner because I came first in cross country. I can’t wait to race in Ohaeawai.  I wonder if I could come first there too?

Recount Writing-At Te Aho's House

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for recount writing.

25/07/17

At Te Aho’s house.

On Saturday morning my family and I went to Te Aho's house in Okaihau for the holidays. When we got there I saw a lot of people there. I felt happy and keen. First my brother and I asked Te Aho and Komene if they could catch the horse for us to ride. He said, “Yes I will go and catch the horse for you.” Next they caught the horse for my brother and I.  Then we rode the horse. It was so fun riding the horse. Then Pimero came outside to hop  on the horse for a ride. She said, “It is so fun.” Finally we all went inside for a drink because we were thirsty.

Te Reo Maori

I have been learning to ask and answer questions in Te Reo Maori.

Toku Pepeha

I have been learning to say my Pepeha with confidence.

Term 2 Goal Setting.

I have achieved all of my goals. I feel excited and proud of  myself.

Recount writing-At the Park

WALT add details to help our readers understand our story.

You can also add interesting words, talking, similes, feelings and thoughts.

I went to the park.

On Saturday morning  my  family and I  went to the park in Kaikohe to have fun.

I felt pumped and keen.

When we got to the park we saw heaps of stuff. I said, “Hmmm  what should play on first?”

The first thing I did at the park was play on the slide first. I felt happy.

The next thing I played on was the swing and I went high and high. I said, “I’m flying high like a plane.” I felt so much happiness.

After that we went to the fish and chip shop. We bought fish and chips for lunch. It was yummy and after that we went home. I felt like it was the best day ever.

Recount Writing-At Kapahaka

WALT add details so our readers will understand our story.

26/06/17

                                At kapa haka

On Saturday afternoon my mum, my brother and I went to kapa haka at Okaihau College because my mum helps the Okaihau College kapahaka group.

They really need to practice the haka, the haka powhiri and the poi. I felt happy and excited.

When my family and I got to kapa haka I saw heaps of people. They were playing in the gym. Some were playing handball and some were playing shoots.

First I played with Tyla and Piimiroa. We played shoots. I got Tyla and Piimiroa out heaps of times. I felt great.

Next Tyla  Piimiroa and I played handball. It was fun because I was in the kings square heaps of time. I got them out. I felt great and amazing.

After that the kapa haka people had a break.

My Speech 2017

Here I am delivering my speech at the Tautoro School Junior Speech competition.

The judges were marking me on showing confidence, good pace

and volume, speaking clearly, audience connection, use of gestures and timing.

I came 1st for the Year 2's in Room 3.

A Portrait of my Mum.

I am learning to use lines, shapes, symmetry and position to create

a portrait of my Mum.

Rewindable Learning - Strategies for sharing.

WALT to use strategies to solve sharing problems.

My Maths group and I created this imovie video to show our learning about using strategies

to solve sharing problems.

Persuasive Writing-Healthy Eating.

WALT write our opinion and our reasons.

30.03.17

Healthy eating

I think should eat healthy food.

Firstly I think we should eat healthy food

because we will have healthy eyes.

Secondly I think we should eat healthy food because we will have healthy skin.

Another reason I think we should eat healthy food is

because we will have heaps of energy.

Lastly I think we should eat healthy food because our body will be healthy.  

So I think we should eat healthy food.  

Recount Writing - At Kapa Haka.

I am learning to add my thoughts and feelings in my writing.

20.03.17

        At kapa haka

On Sunday afternoon I went with my Mum to watch the

haka and the kaea was Mahanga.

First me and Andy played in the sandpit while they were practising.

Then me and Andy went to watch the haka and they were so hearty. I felt amazed because they were so awesome.

Persuasive Writing - Rules at School.

I am learning to write my opinion with reasons.

14.03.17

Rules at school.

I think we should have rules at school.

Firstly I think we should have rules at school because

then we will be a safe school.

Secondly I think we should have rules at school because then we will be a happy and a safe school.

Another reason I think we should have rules at school is because then we will be play with each other nicely.

Lastly I think we should have rules at school

because then the children at our school will be nice to each other.

So I think we should have rules at school.

Recount Writing

I am learning to add my feelings in my writing.

13.03.17

In the weekend.

In the weekend me and my god dad and my two god brothers Andy and VJ went to Trampoline World to bounce on the giant trampoline. It was fun playing tag with the ball. I liked bouncing and playing flips on the tramps.

Here are my learning goals for Term 1 2017.

Persuasive Writing

I am learning to write my opinion and add reasons.

03\03\17

It is wrong to fight.

I think it is wrong to fight.

Firstly I think it is wrong to fight because people will get

hurt.

Secondly I think it is wrong to fight because people might

break the equipment.

Another reason is I think it is wrong to fight because

somebody will get scared.

Lastly I think it is wrong to fight because somebody will cry.

So I think it is wrong to fight.

Persuasive Writing.

I am learning to write my opinion and add reasons.

08.03.17

Being a bucket filling school.

I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school.

Firstly I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school because people will be happy.

Secondly I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school because people will make some friends.

Another reason is because everyone will be nice.

Lastly I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school so everyone can look after each other.

So I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school.

This is my first blog post.

I am learning to write my opinion and add reasons.

10.03.17

Brush your teeth

I think we should brush our teeth every day.

Firstly I think we should brush our teeth every day because then we will not get holes in your teeth.

Secondly I think we should brush our teeth every day

because then we will not get yellow teeth.

Another reason  I think we should brush our teeth every day because then we will have healthy teeth.

Lastly I think we should brush our teeth every day because then our teeth will be clean teeth.

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