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I went to the park.
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On Saturday morning my family and I went to the park in Kaikohe to have fun.
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I felt pumped and keen.
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When we got to the park we saw heaps of stuff.
I said, “Hmmm what should play on first?”
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The first thing I did at the park was play on the slide first.
I felt happy.
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The next thing I played on was the swing and I went high and high.
I said, “I’m flying high like a plane.”
I felt so much happiness.
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After that we went to the fish and chip shop. We bought fish and chips for lunch. It was yummy and after that we went home.
I felt like it was the best day ever.
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