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26/06/17
At kapa haka
On Saturday afternoon my mum, my brother and I went to kapa haka at Okaihau College because my mum helps the Okaihau College kapahaka group.
They really need to practice the haka, the haka powhiri and the poi. I felt happy and excited.
When my family and I got to kapa haka I saw heaps of people. They were playing in the gym. Some were playing handball and some were playing shoots.
First I played with Tyla and Piimiroa. We played shoots. I got Tyla and Piimiroa out heaps of times. I felt great.
Next Tyla Piimiroa and I played handball. It was fun because I was in the kings square heaps of time. I got them out. I felt great and amazing.
After that the kapa haka people had a break.
Hi Huhanah, your story is very interesting. You were very good with your time words and capital letters. I definitely think you achieved your goal. Next time you could have a more interesting title but either than that awesome work. Blog you later.
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