Recount Writting - Cross Country.

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.

17/08/17

                    Cross Country.

“Ready set go,” shouted Whaea Rosina.

I took off like a race car.  My heart was pumping  super fast like it never pumped before. It was Wednesday morning and I was racing with the 5 and 6 year old’s.

We ran around the tree and up the hill. The hardest thing was going up the hill 1 time on Mrs Paraha’s farm.

I was so tired when I was running up the hill 1 time.  

It was so hot when I was running. I felt like I was going to explode while I was running. My side felt like I got stabbed with a knife. It was very painful. I was told that it is called a stitch from running super fast. In the race I came first. My mum and my dad were really surprised and really happy.  I was excited because I knew I was going to have Mcdonald's for my dinner because I came first in cross country. I can’t wait to race in Ohaeawai.  I wonder if I could come first there too?